User talk:Robert de Boer: Difference between revisions

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**always better to link to existing pages, rather then just link to LH. in this case the JKW commentary
**always better to link to existing pages, rather then just link to LH. in this case the JKW commentary
**if quote is from a book, better write 'writes' than 'says'
**if quote is from a book, better write 'writes' than 'says'
*[[Mani mantra]]
**great additions!
**maybe you could add kyperlinks to individual 6 paramitas and 6 realms
**

Revision as of 09:13, 23 November 2023

Feedback on recent edits

  • Amitabha article:
    • could you source the sentence you added?
    • we don't use diacritics in the text of articles for Skt. See Editorial Guidelines
    • you use 'limitless light' when above we used 'boundless light'
    • no need to add 'The Display of the Pure Land of Sukhāvatī' in the External links since the Sutra is already quoted in the article and leads to the Sutra article: Amitabhavyuha Sutra
  • Sukhavati article
    • same remark for diacritics
    • would be good to add source for sentences added
    • same remark on removing translations fo sutras
  • Avalokiteshvara article
    • nice additions to the articles, well referenced
    • it's good to inserts hyperlinks to new material
    • some external links not needed
  • Vajra Guru mantra
    • always better to link to existing pages, rather then just link to LH. in this case the JKW commentary
    • if quote is from a book, better write 'writes' than 'says'
  • Mani mantra
    • great additions!
    • maybe you could add kyperlinks to individual 6 paramitas and 6 realms